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Profile picture of user: sidusferam

That forsaken day is but an hourglass, Repetitive, and as costly as my sin... damn i enjoyed reading this. Effortless and so beautifully done!

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Profile picture of user: a_p_wyndham

Thank you so much. 😁 I really felt a lot of temporal pull from the prompt, so it felt very natural to let the poem flow in that direction. I think it has some rough edges still, like a lot of the single-sitting writes I do for these prompts, but I feel like it landed pretty well. Always glad to put out something you enjoy!