💪💪Really strong conceit and you stick to it all the way through. Each stanza is its own little story, but the repetition keeps it cohesive.😁 The moral turn at the end elevates it from wordplay to wisdom. Tiny note: “quite very scornfully” felt a bit clunky — maybe _“He shot him a black glare, scornfully”_?🙏🙏, and a few tweaks here and there. Otherwise this is tight. Chef's kiss 😘 💋