s_zaynab_kamoonpury's commented: I was starting to read your long reviews but then they disappeared before i could finish. I read the part you said, i should change eyes to gaze to lessen redundancy but 'she felt all gaze on her' just doesn't sound right.. English is only a second language for me but english poets on many siteshave always enjoyed my poems despite the fact they sometimes point out how they are a hodgepodge blend of forms, archaic, modern, technical, vernacular, slang, childish , pun, rhyme, free verse and mor

I was starting to read your long reviews but then they disappeared before i could finish. 
I read the part you said, i should change eyes to gaze to lessen redundancy but 'she felt all gaze on her' just doesn't sound right.. English is only a second language for me but english poets on  many siteshave always enjoyed my poems despite the fact they sometimes point out how they are a hodgepodge blend of forms, archaic,  modern, technical, vernacular, slang, childish , pun, rhyme, free verse and mor

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a_p_wyndham

Hey, and if it sounds right to you, that's what's important.

I apologize if you felt like I was attacking your work. My intent was only to provide craft-focused feedback. Writing what you did with English as a non-native tongue is already incredibly impressive! 