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It's lovely, really!! But, Did you asked her if she wanted to stay? Ever asked for you to choose violence? Ever asked for the stars she prays, you say?! Ever heard the heavy silence? You ask from her to stay Yet never really asked her wishes she prays!!

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knyx

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Every lil thing I say and every lil thing I do It's for her, everything for her is picked and choosed Why don't you ask? You might say .. Cause she won't tell even if she drowns in it So I'll just love, from afar and in silence, Until she's ready to really embrace it.

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knyx

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Yes, I want her desperately to stay I never asked you say.. Cuz she's a girl who'll make herself invisible to make other's day I've just learnt to observe her wishes, cause stars?no that's not what she prayed.

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knyx

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She doesn't see she's a star and how bright she shines, So I'll surround her with mirrors so she sees the eye blinding light she denys, Have you heard the silene, you ask? I've lived in it, with every flight every, moment I've took to see her from afar.

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knyx

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I know I want her to stay but never asked it, Cuz I know just how fast she'll rush to deny it, Yes, she'd rather choose silence and bear it all, But I'd rather choose violence to sort it all , Even if she doesn't want me to do nothing at all, If it triggers her sleepwalk, I'd rather make it cease and loose it all.