"An eye for an eye." The man says as he Pierces six ammos In the heart of another man. He sees blood and smells pain The rivalry from families Made him go On a satisfaction hunt. He will stoop low in The name of revenge, He doesn't care if It's an innocent doe Or a nurturing lamb. He will kill all, With his knife or His bare hands. He will tear each leaf From the trees And poison each drop Of water from the Rivers and their banks. He laughed with drops of Red on his face. Wiping them off with A piece of cloth From his rivals's cloth. He pushes him down, On the sand of the land. He aims to throw the dagger Directly to his heart. He closes his eyes And again open them wide. Only to see his rival smile— "An eye for an eye..." He said making his recall, He pushes the sharpness In his own core, Blood gushes out of his mouth, Teeth stained red. He again repeated— "An eye for an eye...." "Makes the whole world blind." -Palak Solanki Lavender Daisy

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Profile picture of user: s_zaynab_kamoonpury
The offenders and aggressors who start wars are like that indeed, they kill ruthlessly. Im glad those who take revenge don't kill children. Kudos for your bloodied strong great poem Plz also read and comment my newest poem too
Profile picture of user: sidusferam
Well crafted ❤️
Profile picture of user: lifeinslomo
Damn. What a narration. There's a beautiful and powerful message in here.