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Jonah joined John on a jog
in winter while the willows wilted
Jonah jostled john jokingly.
Now they race like rabid raccoons in rain and rage
witless, without a winner


(This prompt is really not my thing)

#alliter

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bluemoon_14

Damn this is so impressive❤️😭

perfect_affizie

This is cooking 🤤 
"Willows wilted" while they're "witless, without a winner" --- the imagery vs the chaos?? 😏
You ate👌😊😍🙌

lyra

this is so impressive though! I know it's a struggle haha 😭

aeris222

Brilliant bits brought by bold beings😉

​This is why alliter is my favourite and I really enjoyed your poem

sidusferam

Damn bro this is a fun write. Love it. I'm even afraid to share my piece😭❤️

creativechronicle

Not your thing?? Could’ve fooled me. This goes hard. Witless and without anyone winning is such a mood 😂❤️