My mind spins fast like a jet in the sky In summers heat and winters cold one text becomes like a crime scene I control and control like a separated piece Sleep feels far as long distances My bed turns as rocks I regret and again I think Each second feels like a curse on me My peace turns as anger Mornings like no relief Evenings like no peace It's like an uninvited guest that comes in I say 'it's ok' and again panic Now it seems as dumb My brain brings back so much tension as a pressured one my brain drums as percussion done

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Profile picture of user: sidusferam

Oh yes, it's a war zone in an overthinking mind. Well crafted!🥺❤️

Profile picture of user: lifeinslomo

The first line simile is so well done, in fact delightful. The 'crime scene' part is so true heh. You wrote for this contest so well and on such short notice. Blown away by your brain 🧠