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lyra

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i remember when the days collected like standing water and the fog clouded my eyes and my friends asked how to help. i didn't know. i only felt the need to drive to the beach and feel the sand under my toes.

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Profile picture of user: sidusferam

Sometimes we can't define the kind of help we need. This has my heart. Ah beautiful writing ❤️

Profile picture of user: a_p_wyndham

Simple words, complex feeling. I think we've all been there, when we either wanted help but couldn't articulate it, or when there was no help that could work. "Days collect[ing] like standing water" is such a vivid depression analog. This holds up to the very best of short form poetry I've read lately.