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gingerbread

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Close, Close your eyes Eyes that hold pearly drops Drops of sparkle of the evening moonlight Moonlight that kisses the unsettling water Water, over which swan's souls binds Binds of silver strings shining in red hue Hue of the clouds of each setting eventide Eventide, we capture together Together we would stay in our fading life Life like the shadows in the growing dawn Dawn lit eyes. ~~gingerbread ๐Ÿ’ƒ(This was fun)๐Ÿ›Œ

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Profile picture of user: perfect_affizie

Wow, this is good ๐Ÿ˜Š And glad you enjoyed writing it as well๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ˜˜

Profile picture of user: lifeinslomo

Silver strings shining Oooh, love that line. Beautiful โค๏ธ

Profile picture of user: sidusferam

eyes closed... ah this one has my heart. absolutely beautiful to read this one

Profile picture of user: a_p_wyndham

May I compare this to a dream? ๐Ÿ˜‚ Lol. In all seriousness, though, it's neat that we felt a similar pull. I wrote mine with that "ethereal waking" feeling in mind, but yours has that "liminal dream" feel. Very interesting parallel. I like it!