I remember your eyes, The prettiest shade of brown, Dulcet as rain tapping, A windstorm held still behind brown eyes. I still hear the sound things make when falling, The fall of your voice, the plate, the caving of my chest. I’m coming apart, bolt by bolt, Learning how quiet ruin can be. You said forever is too long. But in spring, everything refuses to die even this broken, splintered thing in my ribs still wearing your eyes.

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Profile picture of user: s_zaynab_kamoonpury

Poignant bittersweet muse, well expressed with nature imagery wow! Kudos! Plz also read and comment my newest poem too

Profile picture of user: creativechronicle

🎊 congrats called it 😊❤

Profile picture of user: lifeinslomo

Oh, i adore this. I adore that you've woven the prompts so seamlessly and it reads so satisfactorily together. I love what you've done. Loveeeed it.

Profile picture of user: sidusferam

oh silent pain... this broke my heart na. beautifully written!

Profile picture of user: creativechronicle

Wow ❤loved this 👏 it needs medal 🏅