I Remember

4w•©

I remember your eyes
I burned
I froze
in them

broken is the world
for making love
misunderstood

The rain is falling
tonight-
I shall sleep
with a poem
under my pillow

and pray
I only dream of
people I have
never known


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s_zaynab_kamoonpury

Good ideas poem with imagery!

creativechronicle

You showed up ❤speechless ❤❤

lifeinslomo

Your poem touched my heart. The ending made me feel sad too. Beautiful beautiful poem ❤️

perfect_affizie

I felt the burning and freezing both🔥/🥶 To pray for strangers in dreams instead — that’s such gentle defiance🥹😇 This is lovely.🌹🥰