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matchajane

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You’re sleeping peacefully, While I’m crying silently, I want to die, But you want to live, Your voice is so sweet, While mine cannot even speak, Your tears is full of joy, While mine is full of pain, Your name means hope and faith, While mine means sorrow and regret, How can you love someone like me?, When I’m not beautiful as she. - MJ - Old poem (Very old) (I did my best haha, so many incorrect grammar 🥲 and still learning!)

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Profile picture of user: sidusferam

Ah felt this one. I'm pretty sure you'll get better with grammar eventually❤️❤️

Profile picture of user: a_p_wyndham

I think you did very well. Contradiction is one of the fundamental truths about being human, and externalizing that onto a partner with a touch of self-depreciation is effective!