Brave and sharp🫡. You took something heavy and handled it with control, dark humor, and a surprising amount of grace🙏. The dialogue format makes it feel immediate, like you’re actually inside that split-second confrontation.🌟 The “mocking voice” vs the steady response creates real tension, and the punchline at the end lands because it reclaims power without denying the struggle.💖 It’s unsettling, but also weirdly uplifting 😊😊 Keep writing, you'll be great at it 😍🌹