Trigger warning : Metaphorical gun, subtle suggestion, and dark humour. Please read with sunny heart, cause I intended it as a report of an imaginary confrontation with my own intrusive thought. so long as I put my finger near the trigger Ohh, it took you long enough The mocking voice Make me really want to Cock the tense pump Now, what? Hesitated? I have to admit That was on point But this barrel? It won't lie Do it I dare you, do it now! *long exhales *crack *crack "BANG!" I briefly twitched and murmured "I'd say, the Benelli Exorcism seems pretty effective..."
Brave and sharp🫡. You took something heavy and handled it with control, dark humor, and a surprising amount of grace🙏. The dialogue format makes it feel immediate, like you’re actually inside that split-second confrontation.🌟 The “mocking voice” vs the steady response creates real tension, and the punchline at the end lands because it reclaims power without denying the struggle.💖 It’s unsettling, but also weirdly uplifting 😊😊 Keep writing, you'll be great at it 😍🌹