a_p_wyndham's commented: I really like the way you forced line breaks and used punctuation as caesuras in odd places. It really added a lot of weight to the contemplative tone. 👍🏻

I really like the way you forced line breaks and used punctuation as caesuras in odd places. It really added a lot of weight to the contemplative tone. 👍🏻

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lifeinslomo

I do like playing with the lines. Though, I guess, some of the lines still feel gingerly placed 