How do you read in my mind like this ?! I really like your poem :)

hiii. I'll leave some things you can (if you want to) do next time to improve. the poem itself is good. but if you want to improve it, I'd suggest you try and use the "I really want" less. Unless it's intentional, of course. There are a lot of ways to do it. One example is tell why, example: "I want to see myself go soft, in front of a guy who holds me gentle"

Please feel free to leave any comments on how I can make this piece better. I wrote this because lately it's been (in a sense) shoved in my face how single I am and how I'm not very open about my feelings so, please as I said give me advise on how I can improve my work. ☺️💖